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Re: Kaze: Tale of Winds (Chapter 3)
“Yeaaaaa…”Kanlan yawned. Blinking, she took a bite of the apple she was eating and slumped over the table, resting her head on in the palm of her head. The candlelight ...
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption
I like this, a pretty good start. That king seems like a freakin jerk though, is he the antagonist? Ah well, i'll find out soon... The only error i notiticed ...
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: Kaze: Tale of Winds (Chapter 2)
A lone figure walked slowly down the beaten trail of Furui Forest. A slight breeze rustled his black cloak around his body. He was moving slowly, surly. Leaves crunched under ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Chapter One Nightmares and Reality-Edited
This is good. Just a few grammer errors is all. A really good start, beginnings are hard for me personally but you've got a good one. I'm gonna read more.
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Kaze: Tale of Winds (Chapter 1)
The Land of Fioelore… A Country Filled with Over Twenty Million People. It is a World Filled with Magic. This Prosperous Land is inhabited by Many Different Races and Creatures. ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Yo, i'm new here and not sure how to get started. Any help would be great.
Feb 3, 2010