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Hello Falc! Reviewing, because reading the chapters backwards is so much fun. ;) (such a rebel, I know :D ) Anyway, time for the review! Chris had been out sick ...

Hi Falconer! :) Snazzy here for a review! For the most part, the three characters in this chapter are developed nicely, and you can see their personalities throughout the whole ...

Hello tigeraye! :D Good grief, it seems that there are a lot more of these this time of year. (I don't know why, it just seems like I'm seeing them ...

Hi! I like the topics you use to describe - this one especially. I have never been to the beach, although I have always wanted to. This piece almost lets ...

Hello! This is a very unique poem! :D Is it weird that I find it quite humorous, written by a young half-crazed child who has "seen" a unicorn and was ...

Hi! Reading the rest of the chapters before this... It's like eating dessert before dinner! :D I'm such a rebel This is a great way to start the novel, and ...

Hi! Yet another great chapter! The last line was a great ending statement... Suspense and humor-filled. That is hard to accomplish! ;) Now, for the review! Malcolm pushed him away ...

Hi! I agree with tigeraye, I couldn't find much that was really "incorrect" with this, but I'll do my best to give an adequate review! ;) Here we go... "They're ...

Hello Sagitta! :D, This is a nice novel - some of it doesn't make sense, but I guess that's what I get for jumping into chapter six! ;) Anyway, time ...

Hello! :D I like how you write these - it's kind of working on descriptive skills as a writer using a picture alone. :D A really good writing exercise that ...

Hello felistia! This is a nice chapter! I really like how you portray the character's own environments through how they act. (Shiraku loving the water, felistia hating the salt, etc.) ...

Hi Felistia! Another great chapter! Another 'relaxing chapter' after all the action, which is good. ;) You had really good descriptive language, yet you don't stop their journey. Good job ...

Hi Felistia! Snazzy here for a review! :D Though this chapter lacks the normal "action" and "fighting scenes", it is still a suspense-filled and attention-grabbing part! Great job with keeping ...

Hi Felistia! :) This is a nice chapter. You have a couple of funny parts, and the argument at the end is funny as well as serious. Everything is just ...

Hi Felistia! Long time no review... :D Sorry about not reviewing as much - life's been hectic with NaNo. Anyway, I'm here now, so let's get started! :D “Emerald should ...