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Hello! :D I LOVE THIS. The idea of a "forgotten academy" is really cool, and I love the way you're taking it. Anyway, time for the review! ;) Gosh, don’t ...

Hello! :D I'm here, because, hey! Even a near-perfect poem can get better! ;) Now, for the review! :D When I sleep between cold, empty sheets, I will pretend you ...

Hola! :D Figured I owe you a review. ;) This sounds like a good idea for a novel, and you'll be able to expand on it a lot! I really ...

Hola! :D This really gave me a sense of serenity as I was reading, and I like how you include a picture with it. The title is also pretty good, ...

Hola! :D You're title is what drew me in to this, and I'm glad I stopped by to read and review it! :D It's a great idea, and I hope ...

Hi felistia! :D This is a really 'dark' poem, and I like how you present it with the repeating line at the end. I only have one suggestion... Beware, beware ...

Hello, and happy review day! :D This has very good imagery, and I like that this chapter is kind of a "break" from all the action, yet I still get ...

Hello! First of all, I think this is beautiful. In a way, I don't understand 'the sound', yet at the same exact time I do . You did a great ...

Hello MadWriter! Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy it here! ;) Let me first say before the review, that this really draws me in! I love it. Drawing a ...

Hi MeandBooks! I don't remember me reviewing any of your works recently, (or at all), so I'm excited to give you this one! Since I haven't read any of the ...

Hi felistia! I'm finally caught up on reviews! ;) :D Here it is... I have to go and gather a bit more food for the village. If I were you, ...

Hi Felistia! Another well written chapter! I like how Emerald pops back into the story. I really liked her character the first time you introduced her. ;) These look too ...

Hi Felistia! Thanks for being patient with me! It's been a rather hectic week with me finishing up my college course, and I was really excited when I finally found ...

Hey Felistia! :D So this review will be really short, because I couldn't find much 'wrong' with it! :D You have good description, and the dream in the beginning was ...

Hello Felistia! :D Another well-written chapter! ;) I really like the scene with the storm - I can almost imagine in my head! Scratch that, I CAN imagine it in ...