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  • Other » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A walk to be cherished!

    Hello, and WELCOME TO YWS! :D If you have any questions about the site, feel free to ask me! I'll give you my best answer! :D Anyway, on with the ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Bundle of Flowers ~ Chapter 4

    Hi! :D Snazzy here for a review! I haven't read any previous chapters, so I won't be able to help much with overall plot and stuff, although I'll do my ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 1

    Hi marmalade! :D Snazzy here for a review! Norah tried to remember things and slowly she did. This seems a bit, off , and I'm not exactly sure why. Maybe ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: incomplete

    Hello there! :D Well, it seems there isn't much to be reviewed here, but I'll give it my best shot! Incomplete means not "full or finished", like if I turned ...

    Sep 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: ​Chapter 2- Team Bonding…..Of Sorts

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! :D The stealth jet whizzed across the landscape while inside, Katelyn practiced her powers, shooting blasts of energy at targets, while thinking about her ...

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: To Be a Dragonry Pt 1

    Hello Dibidub, and welcome to YWS! Snazzy here for a review! :D Searing pain bolted through Fael’s body and he convulsed on himself. Convulsed means "to suffer violent involuntary contraction ...

    Sep 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 6

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! I don't have anything specific about this, but I do have some general ideas I wanted to make mention of, most of them having ...

    Sep 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Diminishing of Sanity: Chapters 2-3

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! :D First off, I do like the idea. I don't know - I've always liked the idea of traveling to escape something, and a ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Humor Re: Skyfall

    Hello! First of all, pretty good job for maintaining the same sort of humor the entire story. This actually reminds me of a Shel Silverstein poem, (wow, how unpredictable of ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 6

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review (trying to catch up for RevMo... :D )! Anyway, let's dive right in, shall we? "That's our cue," Ethav muttered. He turned his heavy ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Night of the Black Moon

    Hi felistia! :D Snazzy here for a review! All he had to do was bring back an emerald from the cave in the middle of the forest. I think the ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: LYGHT-Chapter 2

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! For the most part, this was really interesting! I was really on the edge of my seat during that last bit! Anyway, let's dive ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 6

    Hello! :D First off, I must say, I don't read a lot of romance. At all. But I found myself intrigued by your title (and description), and as soon as ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Grimm:End Of time Chapter 1

    Hello! :D Good morning/afternoon/evening! Snazzy here for a review! As Samk642 already mentioned, the biggest mistake was grammar. Since it wasn't just in a couple of spots, I'm going to ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: Her Name is Kindness

    Hello! First off, YES! :D This is beautifully written, and a wonderful meaningful message! Anyway, time for the (rather short) review! She stands there, smiling beautifully, and out she holds ...

    Aug 29, 2016


so many languages have fallen / off of the edge of the world / into the dragon's mouth.
— Lucille Clifton