Snazzy

Hi! Like Rosey said, this story does have potential. It just needs a little work. Okay, so one of the main things I saw was the problem with transitions. They ...

Hi! This is amazing, and because of that, I'm going to be super nit-picky. Anyway, time for the review! The daylight wore down to a tired evening glow, I feel ...

Hello! Snazzy here for a review! First, I must say I'm sorry you haven't gotten 2 reviews yet - and it's been nearly 2 months. Anyway, I'll do my best ...

Hi! Snazzy here for a review! and now, thanks to you, I have completed Team Tortoise for February! :D First, I must say this is pretty nice. I would have ...

Hello Ladybug! This is - wow. Link's outburst-ish thing really sent chills up my spine. :) Anyway, time for the review! Link stopped and gave me a small smile that ...

Hello! Snazzy, here for a review! *GASP* To give it to you simply, some of your sentences are bland. Plain. Mediocre 'Joe's'. You tend to use a lot of "I" ...

Hello! I'm on my mobile right now, so I want to apologise ahead of time for all of the spelling mistakes I'm sure you'll find. Anyway, I'll do my best ...

Hello! Alright, so first off, I must say this isn't really that bad! I like the idea of it overall, and your characters are pretty good. Anyway, time for the ...

Hi! First off, I must say I am terribly sorry it took you this long to get one review. It's a horrible thing, really - I would know. But, I'll ...

Alright! :D First, I must apologize that it took you this long to get two reviews! I know how hard it is to have to wait for some, especially when ...

Hi! (Once again!) The nice thing about review day, is that when I go to the back of the green room, there's always amazing works that only 1 other person ...

Hello again! :) WOW. All I can say, is 'wow'! This is truly amazing - especially the end. A kind of chilling, well, chill , I guess. Suspense is spot ...

Snazzy here for a review! *GASPS* Okay, so good parts: the plot is moving along. Your characters are very different (which I like), and not all of them are perfect ...

Hi Falconer! Okay, so I honestly can't take this, er, well because Emily is ACTUALLY STILL ALIVE here... (By the way, I hope you know we're all joking when we ...

Hi! I'm terribly sorry it took this long for you to get two reviews... I'll try my best to give you a decent one! First off, I just want to ...