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No problem! :D (Adding a comma, readers should add the space. Also, I believe the general rule for the dialogue thing is to not confuse the reader ((I was just ...

Thanks for the review! :D

Thanks for the review! :D (And no worries - I haven't been as active either.)

Any time! Yes, I know there are some questions, I only recommended that because she died so quickly, and we had no idea who the lady was. (Although that added ...

Thanks so much for the review! :D I know the night-watch thing is kind of off, although I needed Ben and Maggie to be right after each other (at least ...

It's quite alright. ;) And I'd be lying if I say that doesn't happen to me every day.

Yes, I believe the runaway experiment is brought back in the next chapter (although I could be wrong, as I was the last time with thinking this scene was in ...

I see what you mean about that one sentence... I never noticed it till now. xD Oh - and about the description stars... I guess that wouldn't really work, since ...

Yes - I think the reason why, was because I was trying to do a spin off of two of my favorite poets (Seuss, and Silverstein), and I went halfway ...

I didn't mean the repeat - but after I had written it, I saw that it kind of sort of works... And yes - I was trying a spin off ...

Thank you for the wonderful review! It certainly does help! :D

"Ain't ain't a word, and I ain't gonna say it"

For some reason, I was just thinking about Py during all of this. How she reacted to her first life--and how Py would reveal how she Py's a she, right? ...

Okay, thanks! :)

I totally understand why it's annoying that Maggie is kind of completely in the dark with everything. There's actually a big-ish reveal in the next chapter, but then again, that ...