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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Clumsy

    Great poem! I loved most of the elements, however, I'm super confused on the meaning... We live life like we write on paper; silly lines, you call them, scribbled inarticulately, ...

    Sep 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Trojan Horse

    This is a really incredible poem! The emotions conveyed are clear, and the language is truly beautiful! The word choice here really made it fabulous. I'll try to be nit-picky, ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sorry

    Great work! However, I have a few nit-picky things. However this is a very relatable poem, and I really like the concept and how it was written ^^ Ok. Nit ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Lion

    This is awesome! I love the usage of the old language, and it super duper annoys me when people use some old language, but not all! Fabulous work with consistency ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The One

    Wow, I loved this poem a lot! I, like someone whoever posted before me, thought this would be the stereotypical love story poem, but instead I found myself reading a ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Expectations Falling

    Really well written, although there are a few small things I'm a little confusing. Overall, my main concern is that I didn't exactly get the full concept; I got like, ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Starting a war

    I really like this a lot! It's always difficult with songs because of the reader's lack of music, because often times, the music can- actually, all the time- the music ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mr. Negativity vs Ms. Positivity

    Very well written, and very entertaining as well! Although I've never played softball(not once!) I was somehow able to relate to the pressure you were feeling, and I was almost ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The sun can be cruel

    To be honest, at first, I didn't really understand this poem until I did a quick analyzing in my head. It's nice how each stanza has the same beginning as ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Fire's Escape

    I actually really like this poem! I love how the first line in both stanza's begins with in a way describing what the fire's doing. I also am a fan ...

    Aug 30, 2011


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy