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So! The tree it bore apples And golden apples were they! So, the King was furious When the fruits got stolen one day. Maybe... The tree it bore apples And ...

Just remember... I don't want to be in this story. At all.

Eep! The ending is creepy... this reminds me very much of Poe. I would prefer more showing vs. telling in the very beginning. I would rather see how the two ...

Well, sucks then. :P

Big cities. It's easier getting lost inside. -- Solea And no... she isn't a street rat or thief! :P How do you feel when you fall in love?

*stabs past tense* Ah, one day, it will be completely pretty! And I think I put that comma there to add the next clause, almost as an afterthought, if that ...

Haha... All right is correct. There is no such word as "alright." If you looked in Strunk and White...

Haha... George Orwell was just a pen name. His real name is Eric Blair. :)

I usually have to reread the last couple of chapters I wrote, and generally I get inspired and can write other chapters as well. :) Don't think of them as ...

But he never really liked his writing style! He thought it was too clunky. He always considered himself to be more of a poet, and when his poetry wasn't well ...

The title should be this: "Beginning of Till Death's Acceptance"

Heheh! With clarity comes beauty. ;) Now that I have made this catalogue of swindles and perversions, let me give another example of the kind of writing that they lead ...

Hehehe... I think he's trying to say how language should be clear and beautiful. ;)

Last sentence, hehe.

Or the reverse. ;)