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Haha... he's secretly in love with Phoenix and Dusky. :P

Why ask me? I'm not even in the story. :P But yeah. I'm slightly terrified and extremely disturbed. You're my conscience, of course! Otherwise, I would be a robot. :P ...

Hehe... well that's a play off of one of John Lennon's poems, hehe.

But you don't combine weddings and funerals together, silly. :P

Oh, I know what it means. But the style change is still annoying. :P

O_o It goes from the rap sort of style to a softer lyrical style! GAH! I mean... you can't switch styles like that in the middle of the poem! So ...

As Phoenix slid down the Daishi, the other four commandos were debating where Phoenix was. "He probably wandered off to get a better position," Grif said. Um... Crysi? Is it ...

This is a really soft poem and very abstract poem, but it's not bad. The only thing that seems wrong is the word "permeates" which seems too long to really ...

Hehehe... very Shel Silversteinish of you. ;) This is my favorite poem of yours so far since, though the images it gives are very strange and unconventional, it still gives ...

Well! There's several people taking calculus classes here, so why not talk about some of the problems or concepts that we're having trouble with, so we can help each other ...

I think the weirdest thing about this poem is that you tell us everything. Instead of showing us tangible feelings, this poem relies on emotional thought to pull us through. ...

When Tanis replied to my critique. I wrote it in Word.

Eep! Well, I think Nate's playing around with the database, but the symbols actually mean something, honest. Maybe in a couple of hours, it'll look like something more legible. ^_^

Eep. I think the thingy came back again for the posts.

And the blogs are still a little weird. Otherwise, pretty awesome!