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Yay! And this is where I get to say, “OMG, YOU USED THE NAME KARINA!” In that spelling. Which is obviously the coolest name in existence due to the fact ...

Haha, I hate it when that happens! Well, thank you! FREAK should look pretty now, I think, and that's what counts! :D

I second the "go write" statement. ;)

I don't like um, but I do use uh and er all the time!

You guys are lovely. Thanks for the feedback. Hehehe... I didn't say that you wouldn't have to change anything else. I just sounded what sounded better in that one sentence. ...

She's too passionate, as she's introduced now. She would never do what you want her to do eventually. So you have to change her character. Think Norman Bates. You want ...

You mean "Daishi!"

I did. - the freak Do you consider yourself artistic? How?

Hahaha... this sounds how my novel, FREAK, started out. A couple of warnings: Be very careful about the priest's sermon. The last thing that anybody wants to read is a ...

This is really interesting... like stuff that could be used for display in a museum! When you get rich after pulishing Bound, maybe you can start one up! ;)

As for the links to profiles, they shouldn't be affected, and I'm not having any problems. You may have clicked one when I was fooling around with it. Ah, you're ...

The blog simple url doesn't work for me either. EDIT>> Also, you're going to want to change the url's for the links on the forum. I can't get to other ...

The second one reminds me of WW2 propaganda. Except the idea is less strong. I think it would be better to hide the face more into the smoke and let ...

Hahaha... diary entry then. September 11, 2001 AD (9/11) Dear Diary, I am afraid WWIII has begun. Today I remember waking up and staying in my warm bed, thinking today ...

I don't like shoes. -- the freak How do you like your chocolate?