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Re: Looking for opinions
Just remember! Titles are capitalized. If I talk about my dad, then I'm not using a title at all. He is my dad. Now, if I talk about Dad, I ...
Sep 5, 2006 -
Re: Featured Member: Poor Imp
*snickers* No really... congrats!
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Perfection
Okay! This poem lives and breathes on formatting, so you can check it out, in its very pretty formatting, at the link below: Tell me what you think here! :D
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Keeping The Green
I think this one sentence could be better so instead of this: And so the queen touched their faces, and they fell to their knees and wept. This: And so ...
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Amnesia
Does he forget his entire past?
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: GAH! I hate this sentence!
XD Final-ish version: The freak cast a shy glance at Sadie’s mother. She was gorgeous . She wore an elegant pale green dress, embroidered with a daisy pattern. Small peridot ...
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Help with Dialogue
How is it boring?
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Romance scenes.
Hehe! Okay, I'm writing a story of FREAK (not that you didn't know that, lol) and two of the characters are in lurve. Their ages? 21 and 36, Sooo... yay! ...
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Amnesia
Hahaha... be specific. What type of amnesia? I tend to have fugue amnesia every once and a while over specific, tramatic events. That is, I can remember everything else, except ...
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: The Desert Island Post
1. Someone to have philisophical discussions with as you lie awake listening to the strange noises of the island Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Okay. Elelel! She's fun to talk to... plus she can ...
Sep 3, 2006 -
Re: Tail Held High
I had a tiny little dream Where I was being followed By a tiger, gray and black Hiding in my shadow At first I thought – ignore him. That ghastly ...
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: There was an old man from Dundee
Yay! How very clever... not many people try to do many verses in this format since the bounciness sometimes gets repetitive or old. But this was pretty good. Now, to ...
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: A doll in contrast
Yeah, but the creep factor is what makes it work so well! I mean, the contrasting colors and everything make it THAT much more creepier and better. :)
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: Switching Hosts; Site Will Be Down Sept. 10
I'll probably panic about the history project...
Aug 30, 2006 -
Re: Words from Patton
Too often, as story writers, we don't write. Instead, we procrastinate using in some very creative ways. "Before we can write," we tell ourselves, "we have to come up with ...
Aug 30, 2006
