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Re: A Tip for Soppy Scenes
Sometimes, in the heat of the moment, you can write these horribly awful soppy scenes. Now, if you're lucky, then it's just narrative and you can cut it out and ...
Jul 28, 2006 -
Re: 1st and 3rd person?
Ugh. There are instances where it does work, but it usually sucks. Like... for one of the stories that it does work in, there's 700 billion that it doesn't work ...
Jul 28, 2006 -
Re: YWS 3.0 Bugs
Er... this is a strange one. I can get to the moderators' policy debate forum. Not to the actual moderators' forum... that doesn't exist for me. But still. I'm not ...
Jul 28, 2006 -
Re: On Writing Books
Oh, yes! Publishing would be totally sweet. Slightly unrealistic, but still. Sweet. I'm working on a novel right now and I'm about 75 K words into, which is very encouraging. ...
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: I'm the Pig
Hehe! I would so totally be the pig. :D Er... yeah. I think, for this case, third person would be better. With first person, you can go into how everything ...
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: YWS 3.O
The rest of you know what sections your in charge of. Should be this: The rest of you know what sections you're in charge of. "Who the heck are the ...
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: Uh...Help. (with accents...)
Nani. I think... It has a gnaw sound to it anyway. So it should sound like Non-nee.
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Yes. It was cold. - the freak Let's not talk about it though. - Sadie My characters are SOOOOO messed up. Have you ever looked up and got lost in ...
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: YWS 3.O
...haha... I think I shall have to spork out his other eye.
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: Nonsense
As you spill your soul out in toilets, Over groins and dinner tables and wherever Else the lusting lightening flashes for you. This part is kind of weird... either that, ...
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: EDITING!
HA! I CHANGED A WORD! WORSHIP ME!
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: Uh...Help. (with accents...)
Wait... how do those o's sound?
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: Unpredictable, 2: Rez Life Begins
Basically, my main comment is to put numbers in your titles if you're going to post them separately or else you'll confuse me. And that's bad. :( Also, look through ...
Jul 27, 2006 -
Re: Empress Files: The Ghetto Gremlin(updated 7/30)
XD Hahaha... let us vanquish this ghetto gremlin! Who's with me? Oh, and it should be "black-lined." :P
Jul 26, 2006 -
Re: The Death Parlor
The Death Parlor It was called The Death Parlor, and what a fine establishment it was! Men came, women came, children came – everybody came. It didn’t distinguish between race ...
Jul 26, 2006
