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Texas Instruments rues the day it met an HP in terms of Calculus ;) Keep it comin' Griffy Poo! Speaking of which, there should probably be a mud wrestling match ...

The Queen of Dolls It’s full of dolls. Dolls litter the room, some on the bed, some on the windowsill; they’re everywhere. Most of them have short necks. They used ...

Though you can easily do 2nd + 7 with the same stuff...

For those who don't know, "integrate" is an order for a calculus command. Grif and I are taking a calculus course. The rest of the class dropped -- we're the ...

...the wonderful thing about the internet is that you may be a green alien from the planet Vercox, and I would still treat you the same. :P Anyway, welcome! Again!

Um...have to agree with everyone else here. I know you're a great poet, but I'd have to say this wasn't one of your better attempts. It was just too... blunt ...

Oooh... playwrights tend to be totally awesome story writers too, so maybe if you feel like it, you can experiment in the fiction realm? *looks pleadingly* Nah, you do what ...

Oooo... I love sci-fi and fantasy! Bending the rules in a logical way is just so fun. :) Anyway, welcome! It'll be interesting seeing your work.

Yay! We love thirteen-year-olds. In fact, I find that when you're thirteen, you tend to write the best stuff ever produced. Then, something bad tends to happen and you lose ...

Fortunately/unfortunately, m'dear. You have a description. Then you have an opening about a girl. This says to me, "Aha! There's conflict." Or... is there? RIght now, there's no real conflict. ...

How can your school censor Shakespeare?????? Gah... we do live in Captain Beatty's world, don't we? :?

Yeah, I can imagine it now... "Grif, I don't think you're portraying me right," Snoink said. "What?" Grif said. "You call me the Pink Leader. That's fine and all, but ...

Hey, you have to admit it was friggin' awesome and funny and stuff...

Oooh! I love the imagery! The blurred posters of past legends... this is good stuff! The last sentence/paragraph makes it! "For six panic filled stairs he bored until he passed ...

Just dive right in! :D Here's the thing: you haven't written much lately, or at least not fiction, so you need to develop your style. So play with it! Write ...