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BuT oMgAz, I WaNnA hAvE a PuCe CoLoR. *is whacked by a bowling pin* Yay! The dark theme looks a lot more spiffy anyway, compared to the other dark theme. ...

Er... I blame Pat Buchanan.

First of all, it has to be somewhat relevent to the story. And then... the fun begins! Titles have to be catchy and short. So the question is, what makes ...

LOL, no it's okay. What I look for in comments is reader response. I would think (hope?) that my grammar is sensible and the typos are few, so I'm not ...

Uh... Good question. I think I was in 7th or 8th grade.

Like I said, love the beatle and the eyes are so cool! Which Beatle? John, Paul, George, or Ringo? ;) Actually... my sloppy doodling is actually because I'm a sloppy ...

Someone wanted to see my art. Okay...? Well, here it is. It sucks. Still, you might enjoy it. Somewhat. Here's a beetle. Isn't it cute?

Not really.... You see, the concept of evil is all perspective. If your evil guy is the hero, then he's not evil. See? There is no one who is truly ...

You misunderstand: the dark template is irreversibly screwed up. But no worries! Nate, being the gentleman he is, is working on coding this AWESOME script that will allow you to ...

*loves* Is that, by chance, an alto clarinet? I mean, the neck isn't as curvy as the bass clarinet.

Nobody posted on this...? Well, I'll be the first then. First of all, this had a lot of dialogue. Dialogue is used to move the story and make it interesting. ...

lol, it was an April Fools joke organized by... I think it was Snoink? I deny all knowledge... Congrat Nate! This place is awesome. :)

The lines felt fragmented, but I think that helped you more. Instead of it flowing smoothly, painting a distinct picture, it ended up being jerky -- perfect for a puzzle. ...

I don't know... the beginning reminds me of a limerick, but it isn't one. Perhaps if you edit it a little bit, you can make it a limerick? It might ...

Yep. It's good. I agree... the rhyming really increases the ironic effect. It's kind of fun, in that regard. I mean, not really but... The last line is especially awesome. ...