Snoink

I liked the poem, even though it probably was extremely clichéd, etc., etc. Why? Because it reminded me of my childhood. You see, when I was little, I thought that ...

Hehe! Just read it (finally) and I liked it. :D There were some grammatical errors in it, but I've gone over those grammar errors in several of your stories and ...

I have to agree with the others. It's not really the rhyme that gets me, but the lack of startling imagery. For example, I could write something like: "Tears cascaded ...

His eyes squinted. I would say his eyebrows furrowed, except he didn’t really have any. At all. People said that he had lost them in a super galactic war. They ...

Oh, and for those who are wondering, this is Warthog In A King Prawn Suit. :D

An example of a problem, please? :D

What's the point of this poem? A grammar issue: no mammals on its face

Dark orange sucks. The orange isn't orangey enough! I think a dark version of YWS Standard would be bomb. I did have dark orange up for Halloween though, LMAO! :D

Give more verbose descriptions for an ironic effect.

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Do you mean, "will the new day ever be born?" Because otherwise, I dont think it's really viable. Or are you trying to give the impression of, say, 16th century ...

Yay! It's Easter time at YWS. :D

Two Virgins? XD Probably Abbey Road. It's been everywhere. :)

Aha! I have a little bit of time... First of all, since I haven't really seen you around, I'm Snoink! Welcome to YWS. If you like writing, you'll love it ...

Copy and paste this onto your first entry: Even though the cruel winds of the spring-tide have subsided, the merciless waves of the angered sea have not yet receded. The ...