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Ah... And the moral of the story is YWS members cannot make up their minds. XD

Well... he still *did* kill her best friend, so he wasn't exactly the nicest guy either... *huggles* And if you think Mrs. Coulter was bad in the first book... :roll: ...

Now that there's only one, it'll be a lot easier to make changes and add new stuff, which is going to be very important this month. Is one of these ...

Ah yes... His Dark Materials bestest characters ever. There's Lyra's father, who is awesome. No, scratch that; he's totally awesome. At the start he is a commanding character. After all, ...

Dr. Melissa Palmer's Guide to Hepatitis Liver Disease Really cool book. Very thorough too... quite a pleasure.

*holds breath* This is very exciting... EDIT: It's very dark, no?

I don't really have anything to comment, except that I think it's simplistically really good. It's said in such an innocent way that it sticks to your mind a lot ...

NEW PERSON! :D :D :D Hello! Welcome to the YWS! :D I hope I'm allowed to welcome people...since I'm fairly new as well... :lol: Of course! Though you have the ...

I like to get halfway through a story and then write an outline for it. In the beginning, your fingers flow, but then halfway you begin to try to wrap ...

And, if it was possible, maybe we can have an option of NOT getting emails everytime someone replies? That would be good. Anyway... that's what I've come up with. I ...

AHHH!!! Beginning stories are a pain. Ending them is a pain in the rear. I'll get to the middle of a story, forget about it, delete it and start something ...

Look to ancient mythology. For example, there were many dark myths about prophecies. Some of these prophecies would be absolutely horrible. For example, one guy was told that he would ...

For the first chapter, (I think it's a chapter) the writing dances . Which, between you and me, is a very good thing because it makes it that much more ...

Iris is sitting there, waiting. Waiting for the skies to burst relentlessly upon her, to drown her, waiting for the wind spirits to engulf her, take her along with them. ...

Haha, very catchy too! :D Just one nitpick: "We can drug the wine to lull them to a deep dreamless sleep" I would rather see them broken apart like: "We ...