Snoink

This totally deserves to be the featured work... :roll:

Hello Valerie! Welcome to YWS. You're going to love this place if you love writing. :D

Actually, now that I think of it, I turned down my screen rather low so I would be able to spend friggin' long hours on YWS. Hehehe... What you might ...

Okay, I've been thinking a little bit more, and I think the profile page needs to be tweaked. My understanding in PHP is limited, so I'm not sure how you ...

Oh, this is a nice essay. It was, in every respect, delightful to read. The research you did sounded quite thorough and the points you brought up were well thought ...

Wow... I've never really thought about it. :shock: I should start using it! :lol: I suppose I would use it to create conflict. For instance, if I were doing a ...

No music on blogs... please. Different smilies might be nice too! I mean, I love these guys (:):P:D:(), but only to a certain extent. Ooh! And a piggy smilie! Because ...

Totally sweet, man! :D

He wanted to kill her, she was sure of it. She wiped her face hesitantly and then walked quickly to store. She wanted to talk with her friend...

First of all, why are you writing this? Think about it. If you're writing this solely to become a best seller, then you probably should stop. First of all, J.K. ...

You should have a poll here... No, seriously, one reason why we critique is because we want to go beyond the usual questions of, "Is this good or bad?" No. ...

Begging helps! Or embarrassing Snoinky into seeing it again. ;) Anyway, the story is "AWWWWWWWWWWWW"-ish. If you know what I mean. Nice short little thingy. "Mark, your gonna make me ...

*blinks back sleep* I *hate* Daylights Savings Time! *grumbles*

Grammar check for the first paragraph! Her arms were crossed and the red satin gown she was in wrinkled. I would prefer: "Her arms were crossed and her red satin ...

She wanted to take her diary, change the plot around and sell it. So, while she was writing it, she didn't think, "Oh, I'm going to publish this diary." She ...