Snoink

Not "ok".... It should be "okay." And repeating may and does sell, but don't be a sell out. Write what comes to the heart. :)

Please... her poetry? Allah is far prettier to say than God or Jesus, so the constant repetition is actually nice -- rather rare, actually.

Nicely done! It reminded me of short stories I would read in magazines and books -- ALWAYS a good thing. I liked the voice of the character, I liked the ...

Don't think about it too hard... I can safely say that this is one of the most incoherent stories ever. In fact, I can't make any sense of it at ...

Oh, it should be "BESTTEST" by the way....

LOL! Dusky, that's friggin' awesome.

Working a difficult math problem. I mean really... anyone can vomit up their emotions on paper. That's not creativity. Besides, the idea has already been done a bazillion times before, ...

Gentlemen, this is getting kind of nasty. We all have very strong feelings about this -- after all, it is a young writers' society. Critiques are what we were founded ...

The story induces a very powerful emotion. It makes me want to scream and cry and rip my eyeballs out. Good luck...

Also, you don't have to teach people every little bit of writing like they're in first grade. If they don't understand, go ahead and explain, but if they do understand ...

Me??? Punish my characters? NEVER! I mean, in my story, one's a slave, one has a terminal disease, one gets his arm hacked off... Okay. Maybe you're right. But there ...

I agree with Khay, in that the law is what it is. Our complaints will not change it, NOR will they encourage change, simply encourage the rift between 'Eastern' and ...

Dear Snoink From FREAK. ...hey, I can't help it if my character is illiterate!

Dear Snoink, You portrayed me as the wrong type of guy. Period. I mean, really. You make me sound like a lazy son of a b*tch that doesn't know anything. ...

*looks at date* Ahhhh... suddenly it's all making sense now! *grumbles* Back then, I was so broke, it was pathetic. I couldn't even buy cute clothes for my dynamic avvie!