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Haha... nice man. Anyway, glad to see that we'll be rolling till April 2007!

Right now I am working on a feature that will hopefully bring about a huge increase in the number of reviews per story. Ooh, I'm interested... YSW hsa hepled em ...

Welcome! :D

Some writers believe that the only way they can get their readers hooked into their story is by telling the readers upfront what every single little aspect of their story ...

Something like that, yes! Why, you read my mind!

This actually made sense... Can I have some squirkies? Oh, and to make this sound like an official critique... This is really good except for ________ and you need to ...

Oh, and also — I have a sneaking suspicion as to who the Supreme Evil Overlord Person will be... Hee hee. This is lovely. Singing quartet indeed. Hmmm... it depends. ...

Okay! When I look at chapters, I try to see how they blend with each other. For instance, with my own story, I read the chapters individuallly and then all ...

I was wondering why your name was that. xD Well, I'm glad we have another pathologist on the site! Welcome! :D

Next time don't just edit... post! Yeesh... Smaur's right. The demon is rather glitzy and stuff... therefore the name "Azure" is perfect! I can imagine looking like a magician of ...

The first stanza is a little strange. I would seperate out the people or give them more descriptions. Also, I would rather see the line "gossamer steel dreams" because it ...

On topic, please... :roll: By the way, no, this should not be a YWS comic. If it's rated R, that should tell you it's not suitable for the 13 and ...

Little did SA and Grif know, it wasn't SMAW who was doing the kidnapping, but rather SPEW... Silent Aviator said as he rose up. Unless you're Jesus, you don't rose ...

First of all, our styles are completely different, and I don't want to say, "This is what I would do if I were you" because I'm not you. I do ...

Shel Silverstein If any writer got me to start reading poetry, it was him. I mean, he has these fun lines and everything that don't necessarily rhyme, but are awesome ...