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There was once a guy who wanted me to read his story, but would only let me read the story if I told him a personal secret. I cannot tell ...

I voted for the first one (though I liked the third one a lot). However, I like the outline better. It just looks nicer to me. If you don't want ...

Should we take that literally or...?

Don't try to rake your brain for ideas -- that never works. Just let it go. Remember the saying "A watched pot never boils"? Same concept here. The more you ...

Jiggy is right, but... well... if you're going for slang, then you want to indicate that it is a question. Why? Because the words would naturally get higher as the ...

Don't think you're alone... essays are the most awesomest thing around! And welcome! :)

Awesome. It isn't marked for deletion anymore.

how much did i love you? i counted the ways that you loved me i'll always remember the things we used to do now black and white is all i ...

Aha! Nate replied. ;) So… since I think that people actually want me to tell them what I think of their stories at the onset, I shall tell you! The ...

Also! If you do want to advertise your work here, you might want to tell the critiquers what you want them to look at specifically. That will help them a ...

Chapter 2 It was painful to walk. Every step was an obstacle. His lungs felt like they had been clamped shut, and he gripped at his sides, gasping. He could ...

She was nervous. The room had an adjoining bathroom, so as soon as the man walked out, she crept in there and began to turn the knobs. She had expected, ...

The first one seems to beg to be put into present tense. Why? Because it's so pretty. I don't know why, but I think poetic stories should be in present ...

Er... any special reason why this is broken up into two posts? The first two stanzas are absolutely wonderful. The rest doesn't seem so inspired. Hmm... what a lame critique. ...

I think I understand now. I remember EVERYTHING I read. I get it the first time completely. It might be because I don't ever skim-i find skimming is pointless even ...