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Well... okay, I suppose I didn't like the POV. It was like, do we have to know every stinking comment that goes in his mind??? I mean, if you did ...

XD Oh come on... What you have to do with those kind of characters is the SLAM DOWN! method. That's what you do with the character, not make him an ...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! If Roman has a wife, then that means that he CAN'T be hot and handsome and that means that he probably CAN'T have a hot and sweaty scene with ...

It wasn't that long... :P First of all, I liked it. It had a really poetic style which I liked (imagine that!) so I won't ask you to shorten your ...

Read it and proofread it, please. There are tons of spelling and grammatical errors. Since I've read some of your other work, I won't go on and on about the ...

It is very powerful. Slightly disturbing too -- it feels like you're yelling at me. Which is a rare feeling for me to get when I read anything. The raw ...

Wow.... this was awesome. I like how it reminds me of lounge singers. You've captured the feeling very well, I think. :D

What the...? Why did spellcheck say it was right? What the hell was I spelling? *grumbles about how stupid Word is* Er... Jiggy, can you explain your complaint about those ...

Roman stroked his chestnut hair back and looked back at his watch. Ten minutes till two. More precisely, ten minutes till two in the middle of the night. Or was ...

I don't think this thread was meant for arguing... if you don't like it, you don't have to go there. End of story. And if it is about sex and ...

Eh... too bad. But at least they might be able to do it right... *crosses fingers* I've seen the animated film, and that was actually very good. But I noticed ...

This is a pretty poem. There are some rhymes in here, (make/derogate, demise/lies) and I was wondering whether they were intentional or not. But pretty poem. And nice imagery.

Peter S. Beagle Someone mentioned him already, but he deserves to be mentioned again for his absolutely fabulous story, The Last Unicorn . The story is delightful. You have beautiful ...

Her forehead looks much too small...

The Kleenex box is awesome! :)