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Apparently, it's a thesis statement...

"A Diary of a Young Girl" by Anne Frank. ;)

Fine, except... it's spelled "Memoirs" if you're refering to memories. It's French.

You know I’m no great poet Who can weave words around Meanings, so beautiful and poignant. But just for you I decided To find a metaphor For love. At first ...

Sorry, I couldn't help myself! XD You are really obsessed with Gryphons, that can be slightly off-putting. No, not off-putting, more like; repetitive. Maybe you should do more with your ...

*twitches* Well-executed? Hehe... *puts on executioner mask* Your dialogue holds up but... at the same time, I would love to hear the reactions of the characters. Facial expressions (well... do ...

I like to choose what my brush size is and what kind of brush I have. :P And the filters, if done correctly, *can* look nice. The lips look too ...

Yep. Post a thread officially in the usergroup section. Then, when five people officially sign up, you're in business.

Now it's too overdramatic. :P Show, don't tell. And telling includes flashbacks and angst! Remember, when you write, you want to separate yourself from the emotion. White puts it much ...

No... TBR is quite right. It's "memoirs." Why? Because it's a French word. The word "memohirs" doesn't exist. Or if it does, it is in... the twilight zone. *plays scary ...

Eh... she wrote that when she was 11. She's writing much much better now. I just decided to revive this topic. Why? Because I'm mean like that, lol. Besides, it ...

LOL! If you want a challenge, Jiggy, I suggest that you join "La Plume Noire" which is a usergroup full of such challenges. Jess... you're missing stuff. What does the ...

Oh! I do like this story, perhaps even better than the little of Hourglass I’ve read. Did you ever continue this, or is it just hanging still? “Do not be ...

Hehehe... I love bringing back old work of yours, Sam. :P This has potential... except for the ending. No, scratch that. There is no ending. But there's lots of things ...

Awkward sentences: "Roman looks down at the figure lying in the circle of stones, a mess of tangled hair and sodden wings. " The commas make it weird, lol. Like ...