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The only real way of sticking to a story is forcing yourself to keep writing. But, for the sake of clarity, let me be a little bit more specific. This ...

Read work by writers who are older than you about people who are older than you. The story that opened me up to the adult world was Jane Austen's Pride ...

I would say he teases her intensely until she begins to cry. ...but then, that wouldn't be quite romantic, would it? Okay, scratch that. I say he should look at ...

Wow... I am totally surprised from all the response. I expected one or two people to look at it (or at least write a critique) and I have ten replies. ...

Oh! This is soooo funny. I like the big obnoxious words and how you use them. And the birds shitting on you so they could touch your greatness... perfect! The ...

It sounds like an interesting setting. I would hardly call it a story.

Emily wasn’t really that special, she was just one of those strange girls that just stood out. Not on purpose, mind you. She just did. I had met her on ...

Ah, don't we love sex stories? :P Pretty stuff mostly. I just have one problem with these two lines: Footsteps whisper on smooth, white marble…silver anklets hinting songs of the ...

It had no order, no structure. What was up and what was down was irrelevant in a place like this. But when I said that nothing lived here, I lied. ...

See it here:

Oh dear... I think your book is completely wrong. :? Dusky's right though.

I looked closer, the hero had disappeared. Comma splice error; should be a semicolon. "Sure sweety... It probably should be "sweetie." I dunno... it just looks better. "Grandpa, can we ...

The greatest thing I've ever seen.

But we all love character sketches, no? :) I read this a while ago, but I didn't have the consideration to post my comments on it. :shock: Anyway, I thought ...

These are my ideas about how you can paragraph it. Of course, I may be wrong, but this is what I did. Perhaps it's a little easier to read? No ...