Snoink

As someone who has researched heroin quite a bit, I did like this poem. This has to be my favorite line: "I’m pained and I’m shivering" Nice to incorporate the ...

I have to say, it looks really fun to do, but an explanation would have been fine. Your underlining it went a little overboard... Even so, nice job. Awesome writing ...

Ditto what timjim said. Also: fantasies in the mind. pushed deep in the bed, I think the period is misplaced. It gives a much better picture without it, since the ...

This is so totally awesome... and very catchy. Double platinum, baby!

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It's an American thing then. Our books are edited so that only old books have that two quotation marks. On a side note, Spanish does it really weird. It would ...

Take away Switchfoot's lyrics. It really overshadows your work.

It sucked. You should stop writing. Now. ;) Okay! I liked how you could skip over the parenthesis without ruining the poem. It did seem a bit jagged, but I ...

Wow... I can do math! Bask in my mathiness and postiness and pointiness. Especially my pointiness. I don't know if anybody knew this, but I have extemely pointy elbows. Really. ...

Sometimes if you give your parents some of your work, they'll immediately get less nosy. XD

Are the misspellings also intentional?

Nice! Exactly what did they say that little girl ‘saw’? Ernest’s brain, which somehow didn’t shut down with awe, spoke in the sinister voice of reality. It was not a ...

XD @ Jojo: The old Snoink? Here's a thought for you! What if the old Snoink you know is actually the new Snoink? If you look at my prose and ...

Look at me! I’m your puppet I sing and dance And play my clarinet Just for you, my darling Because, as you can plainly see I need you to be ...

All my chapters are exactly three pages in length, lol. Being in book form stretches it out to be more like six. Remember... 1.5 spacing, Times, is an approximate page ...