Snoink

"And never think there own thoughts. " Not "there" but "their." Otherwise, an interesting poem. Well... it seemed more like a rant with linebreaks than an actual poem, but I ...

First of all, it's very hard to read, in Word and especially on YWS. It needs to be broken up into paragraphs. I think this is partly because the lack ...

Nice story! The main thing that is holding it up is the grammar, but grammar can be easily fixed. ;) The characters are interesting, and it is rather fun to ...

The first three stanzas are okay, but the fourth stanza makes the poem.

:P Well, this is the line that really bugs me: "Our pa e maker makes," What are you trying to say?

Welcome Ginny! You'll find plenty of awesome writers to help you out here. :)

AutophobeX49923 face didn’t show any change in emotion as he searched. Years spent without any direct human contact had rendered facial expressions and body language redundant. This was awkward and ...

^4/10 It makes fun of CSI! Although... I like NV better. Grissom is my hero. Strongbad: - Awesome site. ^_^ And you have to have 250 posts before you can ...

Even though I am STILL totally against them, Snoinkus...:P How do you decide when to split things into chapters/sections/whatever? Is there a certain, universally agreed-upon point to do it? Argh...th

Crossgender is a word I made up for writing really quick, because I had to leave right then. So! If it has another meaning that could be used for writing, ...

The spaces and lack of letters make the poem hard to read and difficult to follow. And it makes it annoying as well. :P

Listen, most of the members will help you with any grammar problems you have, myself included. But you have to ask us! Otherwise, we can't help you. Writing forums are ...

to enjoy each others company I'm pretty sure that there should be an apostrophe somewhere in there. Where? Er... I have a confession to make. I am really really bad ...

Could there be some sort of glitch in the system?

but also the 1,000 posts could just prove that you chat allot? hmm? or it could mean that you just have been critiqueing lots and lots of stuff. anyway congrats ...