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Haikus aren't supposed to rhyme. :P So your two mentions of "frog" shouldn't be, because technically they rhyme. Not good. :P Play around with it a bit and see what ...

I do not like this. Because number one I really do not have a lot of time to write and have had writers block for a while. I also never ...

Okay, I know you've probably heard this message five billion and one times, but I figure that it ought to be said five billion and two times. If you ever ...

I like this stanza: You said, "I'm glad I met you." I laughed because, well, because. Otherwise... I've learned to expect better from you. ;) And I agree, dark angel ...

For a second, I thought this was Nates's! XD Okay... serious now! I'm going to critique your grammar. Grammar isn't as important in poems as it is in stories, but ...

Reading your rambles is fun. :) So don't worry, hehe...

Yeah... when I read the ending, my first thought was, "Where's the rest of the poem?" It doesn't really have a good conclusion, if you know what I mean. :P

Oh, the words aren't that old-fashioned. :P "I love upo the rage" What does "upo" mean? "And pierce other's hands" It should be others'. This is because you're talking about ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Okay, first of all I did like this. In fact, I tend to like anything of a joyful nature. So! Let's continue from there! Generally, wherever you have a ...

Link fixed! Now you can actually see the picture! ;) Now that you see the picture, do you think obscure is better than surround? I think it's a good idea, ...

Awesome stuff, and, what's more, you stayed on topic! Good job. :)

Ooo! It has a lot of potential. :) First of all, I think this can have linebreaks where you put the commas. So it would look like this: Raspberry and ...

A rather avid modeler who did tons of stuff for World of Warcraft 3. He went to and specialized in modeling quite a bit. He also came up with tons ...

*bows or curtseys to Dusky*

So! What does anyone else think?