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I told you your work was always worth waiting for. ;) Okay, grammatically, your guy was rather repetitive in this thoughts. There was one sentence that had anyway twice it ...

Wow... if you could do that in 45 minutes, you're skilled. ;) My main problem was that it was hard to read aloud. Try it... some of the words are ...

If someone is hopeless, they cant do the action right. John tells Jane, "You are a hopeless cause" while they were working on the automobile. That means Jane is completely ...

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You're welcome. :) When I say "abstract" I mean it isn't specific. Most of this description is transcendent. You use very specific details to make a place seem blurry and ...

And I would SOOOO critique this properly. ;) And now! An interview! Why did you start writing "The Bearer?" What effect did YWS have on you as far as completing ...

My favorite chapter is one. It just seems funnier. :) But all in all, the rush of words is fun. Perhaps you can even put this in poetry form for ...

As a writer, I don't do all of the work. You, as the reader, have to do some too. Interesting thought. One writer developed that thought even further. He was ...

It's okay. There are some parts where the symbolism gets overbearing. "The organ plays a surreal song, while reality waits at the doorways." In this line, the word "reality" sounds ...

Aw, thanks Sarah! It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. :) I've finally figured out whether the guy is drunk or not... finally. Revised version coming soon! And Shadowdancer, ...

Reminds me of Pandora's box. The story, which is a Greek myth, goes like this: men are starting to become evil, and Zeus isn't really happy about it. So, to ...

Grif's right. You can't just use private companies, because when I say mankind, I mean all of mankind. At this point in time, we are too concerned with the environment. ...

The problem is the oval. That's what is making it looked scewed. What about a piggy? :)

LOL! The comic is... interesting. The other picture is just weird. It looks like the hand is coming out from his stomach, lol.

*coughs* 2 o'clock here. Glad to be of service!