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I know a shadow of you! Yay! Um... welcome Dono.

I looked up how to make mirrors to see whether you were making sense or not, Mesh, and I found that silver is indeed used for mirrors. Unfortunately, silver can ...

^ Thinks of weird things when reading bad authors.

It looks much too messy, and the lighting effects seem... too solid. It should have more opacity, I would think. I think you need to look at explosion for a ...

Her hips are too thin, which makes it look really weird, because her belly looks normal. Which makes her look pregnant. XD

It reminds me of the Munsters, but yeah, it doesn't really make sense. I still sort of like it because it's a quick nonsensical poem, but I still have to ...

This seems a little nonsensical, but only because I'm not sure what a runway is, or what it would be considered in England, etc. So... um... help? However, I do ...

I got published in a magazine. It was a nonfiction article about my experiences being a homeschooler in college. But otherwise... nope. I haven't gotten any money from my writing. ...

Is anyone published yet?

Is it Hannukah or Channukkah?

I like the first stanza the best because it's quick and short. Then the lines get longer. It seems a little bit more clumsily written... like you're going to a ...

Funny. :)

It's amusing though: you seriously have to take tests before Christmas? *laughs at all your misfortunes* Oh shut up... At least we're done now!

I... um... have a confession. I was surprised at the ending. I didn't know she was murdered, etc. Which really scares me because the YWS folks seemed to know it ...

I like it being specific. "Some people" is too vague and it doesn't sound realistic. Very interesting poem. It sounds very innocent, which leads us to be more sympathetic. IU ...