Snoink

Yay! I love poetry about birds. It's just one of my favorite topics ever. :) And I love your use of colors! It's like... you tapped into two of my ...

Ooo! I do like this. It's strange, simple, yet surprisingly (even with all that French) readable. And it draws a picture. A picture of a frosty night, with blues and ...

First the worst, second the best! ;)

^ I'm in Hell

That's kind of funny that you thought that the last line was forced (it's good to know that it sounded like that), but that actually was the easiest stanza to ...

:) YAY! I'm on Chapter 10 of my story FREAK. And... that chapter sucks, lol! Oh well... editing is good.

If you're having trouble with writing critiques, then I have tutored some members on it, and I would be more than happy to help. I've also written this thread: It ...

Somebody handed me a hat that looked like a moose. Oooookay?

OMG! WHO VOTED NO?????????? *stabs randomly*

Zelithon 6 results Snoink 872 results :P Still win!

"Predator" and "The Blob."

*blinks wearily* I think I'm back. Oh well... at least I can think again. :P

I haven't a clue, lol. But, I think it may be in the future.

I shoot a red ink in his eye before running away, squealing all the while.

Actually, it's "wasteland." A rather strange word, now that I think of it. My suggestion? Don't capitalize everything. You capitalize wasteland, my, alone, life, and person. Try not to capitalize ...