Snoink

It's very catchy, no? :D

Dedicated to Shadow Knight DEATH It’s what we like. Our whole lives surround it. We live it We breathe it We eat it. It destroys Like no other Tearing families ...

This seems to be more of a song...

It reminds me of the 5000000000000 times that my sister and I got lost. Sister: Wait... where are we? Me: Who cares? WHEEE!!! Goes sliding down the sand dunes. Sister: ...

Lots of grammatical mistakes, especially for the dialogue. When you write a sentence, even in dialogue, you end it with a period. Remember that. Also, go through the story with ...

LOL! Well, we are the blind leading the blind. ;) Your rhyming scheme is very forced. :P I wrote a little article on structured poetry here: But interesting idea! I ...

Autumn leaves are falling down Falling down Falling down Autumn leaves are falling down My dear daddy! Get the rake and rake 'em up Rake 'em up Rake 'em up ...

!!! But you need color for the first picture -- we love colorful hats!

8/10 *hums Belle*

6/10 Too long, and doesn't make much sense.

My attack pig will! GO OINKERS!

Adding a touch of hope always helps. And, if the said people are agonizing over how much they miss the person, maybe it won't be so bad...?

Desmond! ...okay, so maybe The Beatles aren't literary geniuses... Oliver?

You're right -- it is sounding more like Avril's kind of tune rather than The Beatles. It just seems to have that flavor of modern pop. The chorus, mind you, ...

No! Qi, you're mean! And you would pick a tiger...