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Re: Pillowcase Dog.
When I first read this, I thought that you meant you loved the girl because she abused animals! XD With that said, interesting idea. I love the title. I just ...
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: 20K
Yep... I officially have no life. XD
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: YWS-1
Griffin crashed into the glass panel protecting the gravity drive. We all groaned... blood from his bloody nose was floating in space. Boni Bee looked at it thoughtfullly. "We should ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Know what really grinds my gears?
A generic form letter/madlib! Try it, but DO NOT SCROLL DOWN. Greeting: Noun: Verb: Noun: Adjective: Noun: Verb: Noun: Adjective: Verb: Noun: Adverb: Celebrity name: Okay, filled it out? Fill ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: New Storybook
I want an ice cream cone.
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: YWS-1
"Um... what about gravity?" I was floating, and to be honest, I felt kind of... strange. I was upside down and slowly being driven crazy. I knew that, in Earth, ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: A Short Story Entitled: A Beggar's Tale
Don't use &; use and. And.. I know that this is a story about Merlin, but... well... quite honestly, there is no story. It's just a longer-than-usual description. I would ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Asher
Good... um... made me want to write... So... I'll critique this later and write instead, eh? But it reminds me of FREAK! A sci fi that isn't a sci fi! ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Ladida...titles are irrelevent!
When you begin, we're not sure who the narrator is. As the poem develops, you learn about the narrator, etc. I guess what really bugs me is the lack of ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Know what really grinds my gears?
No, that would be "Do unto others as you would HAVE THEM do unto you." BIG difference. XD It was a joke... the opposite of what Jesus said, thus the ...
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: I haven't been here in forever!!!
I'm the mod for SPEW! Other than that, same old same old. I was wondering where you were! :)
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: The United States of Canada
I hope not... No offense to Canadians, but we have difficulty enough keeping our country together. :?
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Woodchucks and wood
In this case, does chuck mean vomiting?
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: X-mas present - thanks!
Oh! Thanks guys. :) I will edit that part... soon. >
Nov 21, 2005 -
Re: Atmosphere
Actually, when I read my "dark" pieces, I listen to the corniest music possible so that I can see if the writing can really affect me, LOL. What makes you ...
Nov 21, 2005
