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OH! I love the last one. Now I wanna go...

The dialogue was good and very realistic. But, as the big chimp himself said, it doesn't really connect well. We're never really sure who the narrator is. If we knew, ...

In this storybook, upstages are welcomed. :) It forces you to add conflict and create more interesting scenarios. It's fun. Of course, that usually means that the more experienced a ...

LOL. I have a forum with a storybook I need to update so... But still! I'll miss ya! :'(

Make it up! Storybooks, unlike RPGs, mean that we do each a section (the larger, the better) of the story. For instance, this is one storybook: You don't have to ...

Back to when the thread was young... The nativity scene is an important part of Christmas, and I considering putting that up even more interesting than putting up the tree. ...

I... let people off easily? I LET PEOPLE OFF EASILY?????? Geez... you're such a n00b.

Ooo... some good stuff here. Let's continue the list! Turn Out the Lights by *singsoffkey* Really pretty poem - it has stuck with me for several months now. ARK by ...

Suddenly, the feeling of security is gone and replaced with one of fear. What is going to happen? Why does she feel that way? Expand a little more. Other than ...

^ A World Away, by Duskglimmer Something like this, lol. :P

Oh dear! The prologue is awesome! It reminds me of the first LOTR movie, where Gladriel is talking over... And it's so oralstorylike as well! And the idea is so ...

Yes but... I like hanging around the young writers. XD They're fun to be around! :)

Which stories and poems are your favorites on YWS? Note: don't be offended if you aren't picked; don't get arrogant if you are picked. Remember: glory fades.

Okay... a new twist. For the person above you, find one work you think is interesting and crit it. Then so on, so forth... Don't critique the story here... just ...

^ Commented, just as I changed the sig. XD I wanna come up with a list of phenominal writing with some of the best stuff on YWS. :?