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I think the last line can be better if there's less words. It just seems a little wordy; less is more. But I did like it. As Gal said, deliciously ...

That dog? Hmph! Not anymore!

Pretty poem! Simple, good metering, not too forced, and lovely imagery. Pretty good job there... ;)

10/10 What can I say? Pink Floyd = awesome

No... Nate is by far the cutest guy here. ^_______________^ And that dog is adorable!

I would trim this stanza down, if only to give it more of a metered feel: At even the most hardworking person. It just seems too long.

LOL! I'm tempted to say, it's a really cute story, but I'm afraid Searria might that I'm patronizing. Let me explain: First of all, I think this is a very ...

It is enlightening -- and it does make you wonder. It also makes me want to help out in my community more. Oh! If only I had more bodies!

Incan, fascinating! I never thought of that before. Awesome stuff. Sorry mommy! sorry Qi! mutters* he started it J. haux we must have been typing at the same time yours ...

I forced Ari to do an intensive interview. Here are the results! Have fun... What words would you use to describe yourself? Short, fun, silly, loud, laughing, grandiloquent, loving, hard-working, ...

Incan: your dog is hot. Hotter than you. XP What's its name?

I'm starting to hate the TV. For dinner, we used to talk to each other as a family. Of course, we had time together otherwise, but I didn't think much ...

(Let's not make this an argument, shall we?) The scab only bleeds when you pick it, but that doesn't make it any less itchy.

Onion. Definitely.

First of all, since this is a writing site, we don't allow chatspeak. Otherwise, the mods go absolutely crazy. ^__^ Now! The story! The biggest thing that needs to be ...