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Semicolons do work, but I would rather have fragments in this piece. I have read it over, and so far so good, but I'll probably end up doing the critique ...

XD Oh, this was funny! I love your advice to poets... and it was written in such a pretentious manner that it ended up making fun of the pretentiousness in ...

It was purely a joke, Bobo. The first thing I thought of when I read those posts above was "Rocky Horror Picture Show." Yep. I need to get a life. ...

^ Has an avvie of horses sniffing each other.

It's labeling them with a fact. ;) Um... stupid question here... What exactly is emo, and how is it different from gothic?

^ Crysi is a n00b. Er... she is happy!

Oh no... they're two different parts. The Spanish is very simple and is pleading for help in a childlike manner and the English is being wishy-washy about it, looking over ...

You're repeating yourself. If I was a man, I would be male too. The question is, if God was a human, what gender would God take? Yes, you got it. ...

Maybe you can post the sheet music? ^___^ And... you watched Phantom of the Opera way too much...

This critique looks like it will be done in sections... The sun was just beginning to make its ascent over the horizon, and Ari Levin was already up and dressed, ...

Branden's just... intense. That's perfectly fine.

Do you know Spanish? :)

Hehehe... I am going to get you confused with Rei. You two have the same avvie! Welcome, and keep on reading Dahl... he'll unlock the secrets of the universe for ...

Snoink Prose (all genres) and essays. Essays take priority. PM Comments First of all, don't try to PM or email me any stories. Things get lost in my Inbox very ...

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