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The first thing I would suggest is paragraphing. I don't have my glasses on now, so it's quite difficult to read without any line breaks or paragraphs. In fact, it's ...

Er... I like it! There are some parts that aren't colored in when they should be, but otherwise, nice. I like the faces better though. :P

:P I haven't seen a face I haven't liked yet here. Don't worry. You're all beautiful. And Surreal looks damn hot when he smiles...

Just remember... said is sometimes a lot more effective than any of these words.

Once more, you have some cool stuff. The plot, so far, is interesting (I can't help but to think Tamora Pierce when I read it...) and I would like to ...

^ Likes HP. (Nah... who would have guessed???)

Oops... sorry. Completely my fault. It's an all women's university. They're scaaaaaaaaaaawy. Thery're stalking me!

Oooo! I liked this a lot! Perhaps it was the simplicity that is making me salivate... perhaps it's the message, which is one of hope rather than despair... perhaps it's ...

My favorite was the first one about the ocean, mostly because I love the ocean and everything about it. :) I was hoping that you would expand on that, but ...

The problem with that, Grif, is that "tattoos" does rhyme for the abaab pattern. But... then you're still stuck Tim, because this is the first definition that comes to mind ...

First of all, never EVER post a poll that says, "Is this good?" with only two options. If you do, there's only going to be two thoughts that go through ...

I did like this, mostly because I'm a sucker for metered poetry. The abaab format was a little strange to get into, but it could be done. However, there were ...

Ha! I'm having some problems with it... For some strange reason, there's something missing from it. First of all, I'm not sure about the skins. Skins are frightenly easy to ...

*bows* I remember you!

Oh, why oh why did you ask me to critique poetry! First of all, a warning. I suck at poetry, and any comments, suggestions, or tips can be thrown away ...