Snoink

I don't like the name "Lipizzaner." Otherwise, it seems interesting enough.

Wow... so the lack of the letter "e" wasn't noticable. I'm glad. And Shriek, this story was one of the most difficult stories I've ever written just because of that ...

I want no part of it. I sigh, my body sliding down with a dull thump and I blink slowly at six words. Only six words. Words that disturb, words ...

Well... it is slightly true. Your thyroid, which is the part that controls metabolism, goes crazy when you hit 50 or so, especially in women. The best thing you can ...

This is being taken a little too far, isn't it?

A critique on critiquing, eh? Interesting idea, Incan! ;) And you're totally right... up to a point, this doesn't work for poetry. This is mostly for prose. But still... comments ...

It’s funny how we spend so much time on how to write stories, and yet there is hardly any information about how to write a proper critique. It’s kind of ...

LOL! And we can't forget this comment: "Wow! You're story reminds me of this story! And this story! And this story! And--"

9/10 Very poignant.

They are. Check it out... (4-y)+1=y (4-2.5)+1=2.5 2.5=2.5 jennafina, I'm still trying to figure the matrice thing... I haven't dealt with that yet. XP

Okay, Snoinky, quick, easy one from my book that was bothering me: (3-x)+(x+2)=0 [In Modulo 6] (4-y)+1=y [In Modulo 6] Variables stink when you're only two weeks into the school ...

...I find that strangely amusing. XD

:shock: This is way too much. Nate? Being an intern for a politician? Awesome! I would so totally elect you, Nate. And OMG, you met David Horowitz? AWESOME! Wow...

3/10, because she has scary boobs.

It reminds me of something me and my friend would co-write, lol.