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Okay, I can't stand it anymore. "I laugh in the face of danger, and then hide an wait for it to go away." - Xander, from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer." ...

Oops, I forgot to comment on this. I too love the second stanza. What doesn't seem to fit is the first two lines. Probably because the second person is used ...

5/10 It's interesting, but you spelled children wrong. =/

please God don't abandon me! not when i need you most. i'm hurting badly and i want to cry but i can't not now por favor Díos mi alma está ...

This is NOT a good prologue. It sets it up, mind you, but so clumsily that it leaves the reader uninterested. You can explain all this information in the story. ...

We'd lose a lot of our best critiquers, though, if we split the site in half. That's what I'm worried about. Not necessarily. I'm 17 now, but I like critiquing ...

Not necessarily. Many drugs, even those which are for medicinal purposes, are banned. For instance, and I forgot what drug this was, but a drug for pain was banned by ...

Ties are cool... I didn't realize who she was until a couple a days ago where I looked up her songs on iTunes. :S

The Bible! It's withstood how many millenia and still remains as fresh as it was!

What do you think? Should illegal drugs become legal? Or should we continue banning these substances? Why?

This is neat! But I would like to see more line breaks...

Simplicity is an art. :) Creating an image in the reader's head is the first step in poetry, and strangely enough simple images can convey so much more than long ...

I don't know... it seems like your trying to force in all these big sounding words when some smaller ones would do just fine. Especially thE word "recipient." I don't ...

The first story I wrote was a full picture book called, "The Pilgrim Pig." The book was about the first Thanksgiving, and strangely enough, I researched for that story before ...

Well... me being the silly essayist I am, I look at the story I'm working on and find something to research indepth. For example, the effects of heroin. It's cool, ...