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LOL! Well, you're in California, so I might just stalk you and see how that wedding is coming... Nah, j/k. Good luck!

Pretty good! I like it. Even so, I'm going to point out all the tyops. I thought I was useless, that I didn't eserve any better. Well, now I know ...

How about nonfiction stories?

Er... Lucifer is in but one passage of the bible, and in that passage he is not known as the devil. Just someone who was thrown down from hell.

100/10 THE BEATLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ABBEY ROAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *kisses a million times*

When I marry, it will be to the guy who can give me the nicest carrot cake. So... I wanna dress like a bunny and hop my way to the ...

Like this? "After his wife had returned from the hospital, he had found her in the emptied nursery, with a paint roller in her hand, covering the memories of a ...

Oops! Now I'm really confused. :lol: Don't worry, that happens often... Don't worry. Ask any writer here who likes well-developed characters, and you'll find that they have done the same ...

Very poignant. ;)

Nice! :) Simple, poetic... just the way I like it! However, these lines: My body sweats From the warm glow Of your love for me Of your eyes Brown eyes ...

Er... poetically, it's nice. But there's one line that the essayist in me is screaming about. "and a chorus that impounds your heart - move your feet" It changes tenses! ...

10/10 Calvin turned into a tiger! CUTE!

10/10 because it makes fun of Carrie. XD

Wow... this has become popular. For a second, I must admit, I thought I may have my chapter one comments on this story and vice versa, which would have been ...

What if the mother was unable to care for him, so the grandparents took care of him instead?