Snoink

The grammar of this sentence is driving me crazy: I feel like I’m drunk; my mind reeling and never settling on a single thought, head aching like hell and feeling ...

Copy and paste this and then put it in your original entry. First Trouble Then Comes Trouble or Syndicated Theatre By Matthew We were on the ground level, the street. ...

:shock: You must sleep, Crysi! Must!

^ I agree with her. Orlando's real hair rox. :D

^ Will help me take over the world.

I agree with Gal but... Pink Floyd The Beatles And why the heck am I the first one to mention Pink Floyd? :? SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH THIS!

Only some parts of America, lol. Welcome! You like the Beatles, therefore you must be awesome. :) Though I would have been Maxwell from "Maxwell's Silver Hammer." :P

Already started school. Yay? Chemistry, calculus, music theory, and Spanish 3. Fun! I have 18.5 units total... almost had 20.5, but oh well. And I eat when I want to. ...

My dad works directly with the dept. of homeland security. We know what violence is, lol.

^ Came a month before me, but has more posts than me. *sulks* Oh well... I think I have more points. :P

Is cleaning up on his grammar! YAY!

gentle allay be kiss hug tearfully wistfully lit never soft doggie puppy sooth character paper piggy twitch idiot microphone clarinet walk snout cirrhosis kill judgement warmth praise belief fingernai

"Golden Slumbers" by The Beatles. Or, as Yoko would say, Beatles.

I changed it to "chuckled" though! ;) Sure, give me a full critique. It might help with my other stories, especially since you're talking about word choice, which is something ...

^ Likes hot topic.