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^ Realizes that my sites are gone. :( It really sucks. The other ones I have are on Angelfire and Geocities, and both of them SUCK. I love having the ...

Interesting story which grabs you with a good opening. Some things... "The wind whipped over Nuntius' face" only if the wind whipped over two or more guys named Nuntus. Although ...

Yes, the first line realy does grab your attention, lol. What I had a problem with were the ampersands (&). Do you have to use them? I can't imagine what ...

Yes, the poem was supposed to sound sing-songyish. I love it when poetry does that. It makes a nice lulling tone. :) And the writing is very simple. If I ...

:O! Next time, mention something about Nitrogen Oxide. Pleeeeeeease? That's poetry enough for the whole poem!

Boar! :D

I don't think so. Maybe your computer's being stupid? Maybe it was so scared of my lovely eyes that it blocked my pics!

^ Went crazy on Paint.

I thought it was some modern artist going crazy! LOL!

Hehe! :D She's probably another 40 year old man. :P

It's very simple. You can't read in too deeply, but well... whatever. It's simple. OMG, WHAT IF MATT IS SIMPLE? How does she make it her? :shock:

You're welcome! But now you're making me want to fix my websites, and... *sniffs* They're down! :( They'll be back soon... honest.

Writes very random stuff... and comments on my stuff fairly regularly. WOW!

Is it just me, or are dreams the hardest things to critique? LOL! this dreary, wet dungeon, that seems never ending. Too many dots! And you have all these adjectives ...

Very nice... lots of good points. ^_^