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  • Lounge, The Re: Has this been done to death?

    That would be seriously awesome.

    Jul 12, 2005
  • Writing Tips Re: Dialogue Grammar

    How do you punctuate something where there is an interjection then they continue to speak. "That totally"- he scratched his cheek "that totally sucks" like how to you punctuate that? ...

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Has this been done to death?

    It sounds like an awesome RPG story. :D Er... *ahem* I would read it.

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Over 500 members

    And I know all of them! ...or not.

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Other Re: Web Pages

    I have webpages! I'm not good at it, mind you, but I have webpages! There in my sig.

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Other Re: An Embaressing Sneeze

    Fun! However... one thing. It's embarrassing.

    Jul 11, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: If Only

    A gasp. A lurch. Another nightmare. He wakes, rolls toward her and puts his hand on her shoulder. She starts, shrinks from his touch. “Don’t.” Her voice is thick. Did ...

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: Beauty

    The third verse didn't make sense to me. Otherwise, it was an interesting poem and I enjoyed it.

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: Free

    Well... the rhyming seemed very forced. And the metering didn't seem to make sense either. Also, "heavens" would actually be "heaven's" as it is possesive in that case. the thing ...

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Randomosity Archive Re: person above ya!

    ^ Her freestyle poem was critiqued by me.

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: Your Life in Parlor and My Life in Army (Free Style)

    When you were partying all night long in my empty house, I was shaking in fear because I had to sleep with my gay friends in a same bunker. When ...

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Writing Tips Re: Dialogue Grammar

    Dialogue Grammar Memorize the following rules: “That sucks,” he said. “That sucks!” he said. “Does that suck?” he said. “That sucks,” he said, slapping his knee. “That sucks!” he s

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi. I eat worms.

    ...don't eat cheese while snorkeling. I beg you!

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: I kinda forgot...

    Um... I realized I never did a welcome post. I'm not even sure I was welcomed. So... yeah. I'm new on this site, but I came from TYWC when Shadow ...

    Jul 11, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Why?

    Why does it always seem to be that way? You come up and I start to sway. I look in your eyes, my own mingled in hate. But I can't ...

    Jul 11, 2005


When a person tells you you hurt them, you don't get to decide you didn't.
— Louis C. K.