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...and then retire. XD

LOL! I've never heard a Christian say that. But I consider tha rather... er... lazy. You gotta get involved with life!

I squinted... it looks great!

I liked it. When I read the first line, my mind immediately pictured one of those classic stories that starts with, "Once upon a time..." This isn't a bad thing. ...

It's interesting, but you don't describe your story enough. No, I don't mean using pretentious words *shudders* but I read this poem and I wonder, "Huh?" Now, of course, this ...

I liked the poem. Very random, yes, but it wasn't senseless. Also, it used some pleasantly non-pretentious words. O_o *pats on back* Good job.

You use too much pretentious words. I know it is tempting to look through the dictionary and use every word that you see which is longer than 14 syllables, but ...

Ugh... I like the color black. Black, black black. It's much easier on the eyes. Anyways, the poem is interesting, but it feels too short, as if the idea hasn't ...

I like it too. However, there is this one word that annoyed me, "extracted." Is it necessary? Can you think of a better word? Also, the last couple of lines ...

*high fives* I hate lengthy stuff too... lengthy words and pretentious rhyming that is oh so sophisticated. GAG ME. Anyway, it has somewhat ignited my creative fires. Good... I think.

It's "Insiders/Outsiders." We discussed it in our English class the other day. Insiders are the ones who can joke about their own race/religion/etc. within their own group. Por ejemplo, the ...

No, I don't intend to being sacreligious. I intend to joke around. I love to have fun and play with words and traditional ideas. This is not me being unholy, ...

Blue Gray

Nicole is not such a horrible name. Olga is far worse.

That's what I used to think of the Big Bang until I researched it. :P