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I thought IQ tests were developed for the military, not engineers. Hmmm... Didn't take it, but I have passed the CHSPE, which means I graduated high school at age 16! ...

Geez, we're practically twins. Except, of course, that Griffinkeeper is my twin and so you can't be my twin... But I like to play clarinet, am conservative, and like to ...

Some of them look like confused penguins! Comedy is hardly fiction, but you did something which you should be slashed on your head for and beaten with a very large ...

I actually liked this poem. It took me several rereadings, but I did eventually like this poem. At first it pissed me off because I thought you had cluttered it ...

Oh dear! You wanted me to critique a romance? Not just a romance, but a romance with poetry? You don't know me very well... Nevertheless, I will try to critique ...

*shrugs* If roles are going to be reversed and you want to turn the conventional upside down and on its head, you better lull the reader in. "His Dark Materials" ...

Psh, but you don't have blue eyes! I do! Do not post here unless you have a stuffed elephant in your room.

Frakenstein

First of all, spell check it. There's lots of random errors. Most of them are readable, but I'm still not sure what "pubbing" means. Either that, or my American mind ...

Plot-wise, this sucked. You had no premise other than "treason," which without a timeframe is utterly pointless. :D You miss the point. Whom does he report for treason? But this ...

The Star Spangled Banner “Sing it,” he said, staring at the young lady intently. His lips twitched once, half in a smile, and half in disgust, and he said again, ...

I saw this on TYWC, and I still like it, especially the ending. It works because as it goes on, it sounds soppier and soppier until finally - BAM! - ...

OooOh. I actually liked this! Sometimes the rhythms seemed a little forced, but I liked the imagery and the story very much. Good job!

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