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I dunno... the rhyming seems forced and the rhythm seems off. It's a good effort, mind you, but there are some lines that just seem horribly forced. Especially here: Some ...

Correction, sex is not like any other addiction - after a while it gets boring. smoking or drinking are chemical dependencies, and your body can create a need for them, ...

LOL! No, not irony. Shadow Knight and I are friends. I just bug him whenever I can. ^___^

*bows* Yes, I remember you. This strange bio with the frequent interuptions explains about you too. All I know for certain is the Easter Bunny is real. I've seen him ...

It sucks. But at the same time it doesn't suck. I don't know. On the one hand, he isn't there, which can be rather discouraging and the Catholic Church is ...

YAY! I'm working on a story very much like this, so let's see if I can help you... The way this critique will be, just to be different, very fragmented. ...

For some weird reason, I liked this. Maybe because it wasn't so overwhelmed with angst like the other poems I've read. Even so, I think the last line is a ...

It's not compatable; it's compatible. Change that. :P Otherwise, I loved it. My dad got one of those PDAs and it was telling it the directions to our hotel on ...

Pat Buchanan! ...okay, I need a life.

How long do the articles have to be? Any limit?

AWW!!! THEY'RE SO CUTE!!! My dog:

I'm not into the vampire stuff much, so I won't comment on the story too much. I found it rather cliched, but promising for an 11 year old. When I ...

You can always self-publish. There's plenty of resources on that, if you're interested. Also, if you want, I can dig up a list of tips from a published writer.

I liked it! Of course, my opinion about poetry is essentially meaningless, but I did like the descriptions drawn up about Jesus. It's not the usual stuff about Him being ...

You did something very very bad. You switched tenses. Now what does this mean? Observe: "Grant turned toward the window and looked out." "But I stop, and our faces are ...