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Ack, we can be our worst enemies, can't we? As far as this goes... I think it might be better if you added some external conflict to this poem! Right ...

Hi! I think I am probably missing something critical here.. Azalea, after all, is an Indian and she seems to understand the sentiments and enjoy them where I (an American) ...

I think we are all born with a selfish, egotistic, and greedy nature which can turn us into monsters if we let it.

That video is neat. ^^;; Anyway, when I was watching the video, I noticed two things that I wanted to bring up. :) My emotions sway over the ocean. And ...

Hey NaRachel! :) Okay! Your poem was a really neat poem. But I must admit that it confused me a little! The two parts of your poem seem weirdly separated ...

I really liked the opening lines! It's very catchy and I love the imagery of poets running out of words, especially since the image is so contradictory. Poets are not ...

Yay! I am glad that you get to stay with your best friend. :) This is so sweet because it puts a conflict at the forefront... you moving out. So, ...

inkwell: That is a more fundamentalist Christian message, which tends to say that there is no religion and that faith should only be a relationship between God and yourself. I ...

Hi ajt! :) I kind of like the format here, where you have him looking at Mimi and thinking about what's going on in her head versus what's going on ...

Hey Whitney! :) Okay! So, I have to admit... I've been the recipient of a best friend poem before, and I was tickled pink. So, if you give this to ...

Hey tonepoem! :) Aha, a war poem! Always very dramatic. Now... er... a couple of things! You decided to write about war, which is really dramatic and everything. War means ...

Hey Phil! :) So, this definitely seems quickly done! It was probably so quickly done because of the contest, actually. I don't know if you want to keep it as ...

I remember seeing this poem! :o Just as a sidenote, I think that you don't have to post the same poem multiple times on YWS... you can definitely use the ...

Ooh... actually I quite liked this! Not sure why it hasn't been reviewed yet, but I'm glad it hasn't, otherwise I probably wouldn't have seen it! Anyway, the way I ...

I'm actually more like Kyllorac... if I try to live without red meat, my body kind of goes out of whack. It's weird. So, I can't do that. But, if ...