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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Being Honest with Me

    Hi! Truth is stranger than fiction, right? ;) So, I'll be the first one to admit that I love these juicy kinds of romances, especially if it's based on reality()!!) ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Eternity

    Haha! Yay! I love the message here. Eternity will be grand, eh? :) Also, I totally read it in a religious way, as opposed to a romantic way, although I ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dark Dance Prologue

    I saw that there was a prologue, so I clicked! Now... er... this is in modern times! So, forgive me for saying this, but it seems a little bit odd ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dark Dance Chapter One

    Yay! I love this fairy tale so much, so I am glad you're doing a remake of sorts. It makes me happy! Also, I think the new twist that you ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Young Writers Censorship

    Hi! This actually isn't a blog post. Our blog section on YWS can be accessed by clicking here . You can make a blog and everything! It's neat. I recommend ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: F*** You Inspiration

    Hi Anna! So, I admit! This is pretty amusing. The language seems a little out of place sometimes... if the f-word weren't there, this could be something that could be ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: F*** You Inspiration

    Hi Anna! So, I admit! This is pretty amusing. The language seems a little out of place sometimes... if the f-word weren't there, this could be something that could be ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Transgenic Crops: Controversy and Concern

    Wait, you said that you were going to cite all the sources at the end? You don't cite anything! I'm rather curious as to what you have to say, since ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Lovers Love

    Hi! I see you like Justin Bieber very, very much! Anyway, this poem... First thing is that there are all these typos and everything everywhere. Your title is even wrong! ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Seagull (edited)

    Hi! I basically clicked on this because I am a sucker for bird poems. Yup, I admit it! :) Anyway, for this, you seemed to use a lot of filler ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sirens in 6/8

    Hi Lumi! Okay, this was the best stanza of the whole poem: So say it’s the blush behind the powder, the blood behind the blush that makes men hurt. It’s ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Sometimes

    Hi! Okay, so first of all, once you get through the first three sections, this is really good! It's realistic and gritty and I really like it. It's cool. :) ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 1983

    Hey Michael! So, your poem raises a lot of questions which really are not answered in your poem! For instance, why 1983? Is this a reference to George Orwell's novel? ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: you too will turn to dust, one day

    Hi Dreamwalker! I just wanted to pop by and say that I really liked this. My favorite part about this is the beginning, actually. This part is beautiful: she sleeps ...

    Dec 9, 2011


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