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Re: Being Honest with Me
Hi! Truth is stranger than fiction, right? ;) So, I'll be the first one to admit that I love these juicy kinds of romances, especially if it's based on reality()!!) ...
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Re: Eternity
Haha! Yay! I love the message here. Eternity will be grand, eh? :) Also, I totally read it in a religious way, as opposed to a romantic way, although I ...
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Re: Dark Dance Prologue
I saw that there was a prologue, so I clicked! Now... er... this is in modern times! So, forgive me for saying this, but it seems a little bit odd ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Dark Dance Chapter One
Yay! I love this fairy tale so much, so I am glad you're doing a remake of sorts. It makes me happy! Also, I think the new twist that you ...
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Re: Young Writers Censorship
Hi! This actually isn't a blog post. Our blog section on YWS can be accessed by clicking here . You can make a blog and everything! It's neat. I recommend ...
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Re: F*** You Inspiration
Hi Anna! So, I admit! This is pretty amusing. The language seems a little out of place sometimes... if the f-word weren't there, this could be something that could be ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: F*** You Inspiration
Hi Anna! So, I admit! This is pretty amusing. The language seems a little out of place sometimes... if the f-word weren't there, this could be something that could be ...
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Re: Transgenic Crops: Controversy and Concern
Wait, you said that you were going to cite all the sources at the end? You don't cite anything! I'm rather curious as to what you have to say, since ...
Dec 10, 2011 - Re: I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by Dec 10, 2011
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Re: A Lovers Love
Hi! I see you like Justin Bieber very, very much! Anyway, this poem... First thing is that there are all these typos and everything everywhere. Your title is even wrong! ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: The Seagull (edited)
Hi! I basically clicked on this because I am a sucker for bird poems. Yup, I admit it! :) Anyway, for this, you seemed to use a lot of filler ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Sirens in 6/8
Hi Lumi! Okay, this was the best stanza of the whole poem: So say it’s the blush behind the powder, the blood behind the blush that makes men hurt. It’s ...
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Re: Sometimes
Hi! Okay, so first of all, once you get through the first three sections, this is really good! It's realistic and gritty and I really like it. It's cool. :) ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: 1983
Hey Michael! So, your poem raises a lot of questions which really are not answered in your poem! For instance, why 1983? Is this a reference to George Orwell's novel? ...
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Re: you too will turn to dust, one day
Hi Dreamwalker! I just wanted to pop by and say that I really liked this. My favorite part about this is the beginning, actually. This part is beautiful: she sleeps ...
Dec 9, 2011
