-
Re: A World With One Religion
I don't understand, Kyllorac. Since when have matters of faith been equivalent to breeding potatoes? :? Your logic doesn't quite make sense to me.
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: My Son is Gay
This might just be me, but while I love bare dialogue, this seems to be wanting to be fleshed out. Especially if you continue it! Also, fleshing it out and ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: That's So Gay!
Hi! I actually think this would serve as a nonfiction story than a poem. Right now, this is a little more than a rant that is in poetic form. Which ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: The Ghosts of Octavius-Chapter 5-The end
Hi! You linked this to me, so I'd figure I would comment. I didn't read the rest because you just linked me this. But, I think I have a rough ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: YWS: Apollo
What a lovely Christmas present! You're the best, Nate. :)
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Do you support the Occupy Wall Street movement?
Do you think change is unnecessary or impossible? What change are you talking about?
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Do you support the Occupy Wall Street movement?
Like I said before, I think the only way they can really institute change is if they are the change. Call me naive, but would it be possible for the ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Just Tell Me
Hey Qara! :) For this poem... one of the things that struck me was that all these people seemed to do was they looked at each other and then they ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: I just joined....
Hello! :) Don't worry about the rejections too much... at least they wrote back, right? Many people won't even do that. So, I know it hurts, but just pick yourself ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Carnation Milk
Locked. Plagiarized.
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Starlit night
Locked. Plagiarized.
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Perfect Days
Locked. Plagiarized. Poetry is from Maggie Stiefvater's "Linger."
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Neverland
Locked. Plagiarized.
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Problems with the protagonist and voice
It'll be better! I bet you learned a lot from the old one. ;)
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: I Believe
I don't know. This looks more like a creed than an actual poem. I mean, we (my church and I) recite the Nicene Creed every time we go to church, ...
Nov 19, 2011
