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Re: Hi Everyone!
Aww! Hopefully we'll give you inspiration to write when you're not depressed! Welcome to YWS! :D
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Multiple Intelligences Test
nz4wnk0d86525bc I am word smart, I guess.
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Finger in the Dust
Hahah! Now I feel a little less creepy! This is good! XD You should definitely post the new version! :D
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Reflections on 9/11
Hi Wolfdra! I was avoiding these sorts of posts around September 11, so I didn't get a chance to see this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that yeah, crazy ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Soldier's Lullaby
Hi AncientForever! Okay, this is going to be a quick comment... This poem sounds a little strange. For one, it doesn't seem clear of who you're talking about or in ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Finger in the Dust
KITTEH. I didn't see this until now. Don't kill me! >.> .> Of course, um... I could be completely misreading it. I admit this. I have a morbid imagination. But ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: to kiss a dream goodnight
Hey Dreamwalker! :D Okay so... yeah, this is definitely a weird love poem. Not quite sure if I would call it quite a "love" poem as there doesn't seem to ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Buried in Ash
Hey Veritas! I was kind of avoiding September 11 pieces before while the sensationalism was at its highest, so I didn't get a chance to read this until now (what ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Saxophones in Fall
Hi inkwell! :) Okay, so you're a gifted writer that can use the the five senses in order to express yourself. For example, in this poem you have the taste ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Do you write every day?
I would love to say yes, but truthfully? No.
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Haze (Chapter One)
Hi Cspr! I saw some of your later chapters lying around unreviewed, so I figured I would review them... but first, it's always good reading the first stuff, right? ;) ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: The Soundtrack of my life.
Hey duckiedye! :D Oh wow, you have quite a story! I can imagine why you wouldn't want to testify... frankly, that sounds rather awful. I mean, you finally get over ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (18)
Lomones couldn’t get there fast enough. Lin had fallen unconscious, tucked to his chest, and he drove forward, cutting through the crowds with Pidge fast at his heels. He felt ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Abortion
Dude. If this is a satire, go completely over the top with it. Right now, your arguments are reasonable to the point where some people (including myself!) would agree with ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Abortion
Er, I disagree somewhat with Josh. I think opinion pieces are fine as articles. One does not have to be impartial to write an article-- in fact, I kind of ...
Sep 23, 2011
