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Re: Heart Murmurs ch. 1
Hey Stori! I like the perspective, but I have to say that it feels like there is something missing. It seems too short. Right now, we don't really see a ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Nate is a Tropical Storm.
Tell me about it. Plus, due largely to Lee, it hasn't stopped raining in Washington, DC since Sunday. But longtime users of YWS have always known I was a windbag. ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Nate's Outburst
So, this isn't a general article, so I am moving it to the lounge!
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Lolzombies Prologue
OMG. Why is this in fantasy and not in nonfiction?! This is essentially the story of my life! :D Anyway, you should totally write more of this. Mostly because it's ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: The Lion
Hey Ignatius! I like the feel of your poem and the poem's subject. What can I say? Predatory cats in dreams make me happy. Mostly for me, it's tigers, but ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
hey guys, i was wondering if YWS is only for a particular country or is it global? sorry, just curious! Global! :) We follow the U.S. laws for internet sites ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Official 13,002 posts boogie!
Aw, I wubs you too!
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Official 13,002 posts boogie!
Yep! I missed the 13,000 post. Aww, too bad. But, I made it to the 13,002 post mark! So let's boogie! :elephant:
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Well Hello :)
Hi Irene! Wow! It's really cool that your teacher would give you this site! :D A practicing Wiccan? That's cool! My best friend is Wiccan. It is a really interesting ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Hello- im new and confused and um hi!
Yay! Two pages is much better than no pages at all. Welcome to YWS! :D The way YWS works is that you post literary pieces on the literary forums (you ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Hello, I'm new...
Hi Rachel! Good to have you here. :) Is there really a big rock, or is that just a myth? I didn't really know. As far as blondes go, truth ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Dagger of Truth (Prologue and Chapter 1 part one)
Hi Deathcurrent! :D Okay, so you have an interesting premise here! One thing that particularly tickled my fancy was the idea of the boyfriend being stuck in her head. Ouch! ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: The Red Handkerchief
Hey FishStark! Love the twist at the end. :) Okay! So this story has a fairly classical feel to it, where you mostly describe things and don't actually show them. ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Unheard Screams- a 9/11 Memorial
Hi Milkandcookies! You need to research the chain of events, because some things are not factually correct, and for those of us who remember this time quite vividly, the lack ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: All of My Stories and Poetries
Locked. Plagiarism in at least two pieces, maybe more.
Sep 11, 2011