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Oh wow... I love how bouncy and upbeat this poem is, Daisuki. I sometimes bug people and say, "You have to write poems in your voice, but you've definitely done ...

Haha, no work is ever truly perfect! That's the fun part about art. If it were perfect, it would hardly be beautiful. :) And isn't it funny how much a ...

Haha, you're welcome! Also, you are a girl. You should be able to handle blood by now. xD It's... a complication from the miscarriage? And this is a really recent ...

XD One more reason why you are completely awesome! ;) Also, I love, love, love that feature of YWS. I wish it worked for the clubs!

I'm just going to comment in red or green, okay? :) * “I’m standing in front of a bartender in a wedding dress and yet, that isn’t the craziest thing ...

You Aussies and your meat pies! :D One of our YWSers actually came to America, and he was disappointed by our lack of meat pies. He actually drove around and ...

Haha, yeah... the colored names are kind of confusing at first, but it's all good. And YES. This site is big! But, we're a good little community, so it works ...

Hi katngo! :D You said you wanted this review so… well… here I am! First of all, I have to comment on the formatting… it’s very weird. I am not ...

Hey, Priceless! Okay, so you asked for this to be reviewed, so here I am! Now, as far as this piece goes, it seems… partly realistic and partly not? I ...

Ack, I hated September 11 with a deep passion. I was 13 at the time, so I could understand a lot more than you did, but I felt so stupid. ...

Hahah! I wouldn't quite call this poem innocent, actually. For one, the actual story between Jack and Jill has to do with the French revolution and the beheadings of the ...

Lomones felt his stomach sink. “Where is she?” The matron looked scared. “Who?” “Lin,” he said, his voice rising. “Where is she?” The matron laughed nervously. “I told you, she’s ...

Where is the option of Pat Buchanan?

What you said, Suzanne, reminds me of a G.K. Chesterton quote: "A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about ...

Hey Benway! Okay, so I loved your poem. It kind of reminds me of "This Is Just To Say" by William Carlos Williams in its apparent simplicity in a common ...